My first postcard uses repetition to change the eye movement within this piece. Using Tom Bamberger's artwork as an example, I decided to replicate the trees in this picture to focus in on the nature instead of the man made bridge itself. By replicating the dark trees and some of the leaves, I created a wall of sorts, blocking off the bridge to potential pedestrians. In this image the nature is taking over the industrial bars. Aesthetically, I find it interesting that their is repeated vertical lines in the bridge as well as with the tree trunks. I am wondering here what is really important to the campus? What should be destroyed and what should be taken care of? It seems to me that we've been neglecting the nature that was created naturally for us and, only now are we adding in new landscaping features. I think it is important to take care of the world around us, and maybe planting new flowers, and landscaped trees can put a band-aid on that, but are we really fixing the problem? Does the bridge represent man destroying nature?

For my second postcard I used a photo taken from underneath the bridge. I used this photo because it is sort of ugly-- it isn't pretty manicured trees that we are accustomed to on the rest of our campus. These trees are free to grown on their own and are all over the place. I would assume that these trees were planted by the school many years ago to help with the water erosion problem. As inspired by Sandy Skoklund, I used purples and green colors to showcase that this is a huge problem for our campus. The ravines on campus have had severe decay and erosion due to the constant flooding that happens, and the access snow that we get every year. I wanted to use colors that would make the trees look sick because we need to protect nature. Instead of spending lots of money to put band aids on the problem, we need to use a plan that will work. What can we do to help our campus? What is going on with our land? How can we fix these issues.
For this photo, I thought it would be most powerful to use a camera angle that showcased the campus in the same way that an advertisement would. This could very well be something that Grand Valley sells in the school store. I felt like approaching this message in this manner would be the most effective. The problem I see everyday when I'm walking to class, is that everyone is looking down or on their phones-- nobody is looking at the world around them. How can we enjoy our lives and the beauty of the world if we are never looking around at what is right in front of us? I used the words "look around you" as a friendly reminder to appreciate what is in front of you and the beauty that is all around us.


I like your 3rd postcard the best. i really like the angle that the picture is taken and the idea behind the quote. It represents the issue that you had.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite image is the second image. The color change is stunning and so appealing to the eye. The picture is a place where not a lot of people look, but making it that color sucks me in and I can’t look away. I like that the topic of the destruction of the ravines is important to you. Photoshop skills are great!
ReplyDeleteI like your theme of a bridge being a structure to connect two different places as well as being a convenient mode of transportation. I like the message of your third postcard. I think that as students in our generation we are so focused on getting from point A to point B that we don’t recognize our surroundings.
ReplyDeleteYour third postcard was my favorite. The wide shot is very appropriate for the message.
ReplyDeleteBridget, I really appreciate your thoughtful approach to all of your postcards. I think that you pinpointed a very real problem, it's precise and exact (where as many other concepts were broad) and your did a great job at highlighting it and addressing the issue. My favorite would have to be your third postcard. Your passion on the issue is evident and I wish that the bridge actually said that.
ReplyDeleteOf the three, I think the first is my favorite. The message was clear and concise, and the use of repetition was well utilized. The contrast is also worthy of note.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your desire to display one of the most picturesque spots on campus. All three solutions go well together, and they each take a different approach to the same concepts and issues. Well executed.
My favorite is your first postcard
ReplyDeleteI immediately understood that the trees are like bars keeping you from getting into the riven.
The change is apparent and yet doesn’t feel forced.
Nice use of the tools and your skills. It was clean and well done. I also like the idea of nature fighting back.
Your first post card is my favorite. The images are nicely sewn together and the repetition makes for a nice composition. Your over all message is great and a nice twist on the "save the environment", asking what we can do for nature instead of just using it to beautify the campus.
ReplyDeleteThe second postcard is my favorite conceptually. The idea that the University is putting band-aid fixes on the problems while we have ravines that GVSU seems to ignore. I think that the treatment of color to the background highlights the landscape. I would love to see additions or other alterations to the composition to pull more emphasis on the nature of the space, but I think the color does a lot of the work. Good job!
ReplyDeleteBridget,
ReplyDeleteI like your third postcard. You are right, I like the approachable aesthetic of the image. I like the message to remind us to observe the nature and landscaping around us rather than our technology. Placement of the text makes sense too. It warns those about the cross the bridge that they need to be aware or they might miss something important.
Bridget,
ReplyDeleteYour last photo with the words on the bridge was my absolute favorite. I to love nature, technology certainly gets in the way from time to time but we do take for granted what is around us. It is important that we don't forget what the world has given us. Well done :)
Bridget,
ReplyDeleteThe message from your third postcard really stood out to me. I walk across this bridge all the time to get between classes, and I definitely notice how people are always on their phones, instead of enjoying the beauty around them.